lupestripe's lair

After considerable thought and listening to the advise of some trusted friends, I have started to publish some of my stories on FA. The first one, which is the original ending to the piece I wrote for the Confuzzled conbook back in 2008, can be found on my profile here.

Any tips, comments or thoughts would be greatly appreciated but remember it is the first piece I ever wrote in the Fandom (and the first thing I had written in six years) so it may be a bit rusty. I hope you enjoy ^^